I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School, Auckland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilvie.
Friday, 7 June 2019
Blog commenting
Today we had to make a comment on LS1's blog I wrote a comment on Aliqwa's blog. How I made a good comment is I used 5 things to make a good comment. The first thing to make a comment is to be specific and give a greeting and feedback. The nest thing to make a good comment is to add new information. The next thing to make a good comment is to make a connection. The fourth thing to make a good comment is to ask a question. The last thing to make a good comment is to profread and that is how to make a good comment.
Thursday, 6 June 2019
Gymnastics
In gymnastics we are learning to do poses, backwards roll, grapevine on the beam and front and back support.
Wednesday, 5 June 2019
Complex Sentence
Complex Sentences
Simple - Steve wasn’t at our usual spot.
Complex - Steve wasn’t at our usual spot, when he was sick.
When Steve was sick, he wasn’t at our usual spot.
We took a simple sentence from our library book, added an AAAWWUBIS,
and made a complex sentence.
Tuesday, 4 June 2019
Complex Sentence
Complex Sentence
Simple - You can never be too careful.
Complex - You can never be too careful, when you are at war against others.
We took a simple sentence from our library book, added an
AAAWWUBIS, and made a complex sentence.
AAAWWUBIS, and made a complex sentence.
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